Definitely a well written story!One of the strongest points as well as its weakness for me was the attention to detail. I could imagine everything the author was describing perfectly, but at times it became a bit much. We have what feels like the character's entire backstory first thing in the first chapter and it felt a bit cumbersome. BUT! It was all written beautifully.My only advice would be to do more showing and less telling. Other than that I think you have a promising story on your hands :)
This feels like a unique take on an extremely saturated market, I’m excited learning about how the class system works, I’ve never seen anything like it before.The writing is pretty good, and it seems the story will involve uncovering secrets and exploring the world instead of just being exclusively non-stop combat like every other vrmmorpg novel I’ve read. Which makes sense to me, because if it’s supposed to be this new world that is indistinguishable from real life, you would obviously explore and engage with it, not just mindlessly grind like your usual rpg game on pc.I’m looking forward to more chapters from you, good work!
The cover is scary and the synopsis sounds interesting. I’m just not sure if I will continue to resd the novel. Maybe yes or maybe no? Definitely need some time to think about what to do
MC sometimes be slow on the uptake or he just really stubborn about some things.However it is a good book and should give it a try. The world is expanding and more people, Family, clans, Gods, other Earthlings, Servant of Gods are being introduce.
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