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The story is interesting.It has a decent storytelling and worldbuilding, recommended for those who like something like dungeon story.However, the reaction of the MC is a bit dull. Maybe the author is not experienced yet, but it become better in the later chapter.Overall, recommended!
My only question is what is the NTR situation? How does it occor. I hate NTR, absolutely hate it. I must know what it means in this story. I’ve seen stories where they have the tag NTR but its only for aide characters, not mc’s girls, just wondering what is it in this cuz if it affevts the mc... im gone.
This is what I cell a interesting Description and I hope the novel will be good too 👍👍👍💞☺☺💞😄🤩🤩🤗💓💓💓🤩😍🤩😍🤩🥰😄💝😄💝😄🥰😄😍🤩🤩💋🥰🥰💝💝💋💝💝💋💝💝🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖💖💗💗💗💓💓💞💞💕💕💕💟💟💟💟💟💌💌💌💌💋💋💘💝💖💖💝💝💝💗🥰🥰💞💓💓🤩💗😍😄😄🤗👍👍💌💕💕💕💕💕💖💖
It was fine until hMC decided to play an NPC role... That's a trap that'll create a wall too big for the author to overcome and will create a dead end in his story.....
it is good till chapter 12, especially the bond between the brothers. Need more chaps to get an overall view of this novel. Hope to get 2 chaps a day.😂
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