Echoes of the Maw - The Seventh Regret

Natsu chimmes in and says "Yeah, Im hungry!" which causes him to be whacked upside the head by Erza.

                     OMG NO WAY MILO HOW COULD YOU says Breanna. I HATE YOU! I think to myself as she starts to beat me up. I- I'm....S-sorry... Br-Breanna I say as Im scrunched up on the school floor as I remembered I was home maybe I was wrong. Then this big tall dude walked up to Breanna then looked at me with a scary face. YOU NEED TO STOP BULLING HER SHE'S WEAK he said to Breanna. Wow...that...was...so rude he could have just kept the last part to himself at least I thought to myself.

"I'm protecting my people. Besides, Ozpin's war is pointless. There is no end to this. It's been how long since this all began? Countless lifetimes, and he's failed in each one. The world is stronger now more than ever, and he still has no chance."

One of her swords slashed low as she tried to separate me from my knees.

"Do you know what you did wrong?" he asked again, his voice equally low and dark as  she sank to her knees.

All that glitters is gold

What a intense story, keep it up. Keep writing