Eat Me All (R19)

Sounds like an original and novel concept. I'm looking forward to giving it a try.                                                                     

I usually love wish fulfillment type novels but this one just felt so... dull. If you enjoy slice of life you might like this but this ain't for me. I feel like I'm reading a face slapping novel but the only face getting slapped is mine for expecting anything to happen.I really enjoyed it until the author tried to introduce some sort of relationship development in chapter 10 using some cheesy plot that felt like it was copied straight out of some movie. I don't think it was particularly bad, but I just felt it unfolded totally unnaturally.At this point the hype died for me and I realized there's literally only two characters in the novel that even mattered, as if the other characters exist just for the sake of it. The injured teacher and other students who were helping were skimmed over in a few paragraphs without dialogue and even the MC's ex appears when he's on a date for no reason and has zero interaction or significance.So far, it just feels like the MC is going around flaunting his own wealth to himself and that's all.

The synopsis is good. The personality of the MC can be seen. I like your cover too, it's good! For the story, your idea is promising. I like the concept of finding people for the twelve (you know what I mean). There's just some capitalixation problems but it's not that noticeable.Keep up the good work author!

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