
Dungeon of Pride, Laplace
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Author:
ViciousPepper
- Status: Ongoing
Rating(3.9 / 5.0, 19 votes)
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One thing I wise change is make chapters large ( while reading I feel like when I started to read and end in few seconds
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-pace is good most of the time but sometime quite slow
-i don know about others but i really like if you give more detail out for the character. just my opinion on this one
-i believe when theres a great battle about to happen you could just delay some of the chapter and then boom mass release so we could feel the fight more closely
-thats all, for me this novel is good
Overall, it's an interesting novel to read.
The plot is incredibly good and so is the world setting. I especially like the dungeon creation system and also the character designing.
The MC is also good at adapting to change of surroundings.
This story has a great potential due to it's unique concept and also the plot is fresh.
I recommend it to anyone who wants to read a good story with a new plot that is not like those clinche stories of heros transmigrating to save the world
Author your grammar is on point, world building is okay .
The book has a future. keep it up.
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