The chapters miss the flow between them and there's no proper development of plot. the cartel seems to change from beginning ch 1 to ch 30 in a large manner (also same with the personality of mc after only five days).
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not a bad story. but as usual with many stories on Webnovel the editing starts out good and then goes to the dump. first 110 chapters are good quality. Then it starts to degrade fast. missing punctuation, missing captilization for names, incorrect grammar, changing established names, etc. if the quality of the chapters editing had stayed the same I would rate it as 3/5. good to read to pass the time. I give it q star due to the usual drop of good quality to garbage editing.
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