Dual Sovereignty (双重主権 - Sōjū Shuken)

Ride on author. Please update more frequently. Talia is gonna be a mad character I'm sure of it. Let's just wait for character development to kick in. So sear readers or potential ones, you've come to the right place.

o conceito é muito bom. espero que não pare de postar.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I like how the characters are introduced ch 1 and the bonds between them. I also found the Kobe part funny- the writing is good and fleshed out well. The part with the nightmare (ch 3 I think) was rlly good with how the emotions were laid out and the monster

DISGUSTING________________________________________________________________________________________________________Cover sucks change it- looks like a kidd leaving from his kindergarden.. make it like he is hoping for something- a a little dark one with one light...

I like they way the story starts off, it's mysterious and intriguing. I will say the jumping from different view points at the beginning did throw me off slightly, but that's a minor personal preference. Good job author, keep it up!

"There's my birthday boy! You ready for your gift from me," he asked mischievously.

The two laid down beside one another.

Intelligent: 318

Time past quickly and it was 7:00pm before we know it, so we rushed to the school as fast as we could, when we arrived there June and his friends were waiting for us.

Am I a dragon, dragon do lay egg in novel. I am very curious my self. I need to get out! It's so hard to brake from this thing. Crack!! Crack!! Crackk!! Arrgh!! I am out! I got hand feet, and I am already adult. What am I?

She led him to a different part of the zone, so close to the center the highest Kapok tree didn't allow any wooden plant to grown instead it was full with a weird leafless tree, that seems to want to play hard whether it was alive or dead, they are crooked, long and bendy some branch even touch the ground and he could see two-tailed monkeys swinging on the branch.

Sudah sekitar satu minggu dia ada dalam situasi yang sedikit mulai dia pahami.