Dreams Above the City

Following their momentum, Iida and Katsuki triggered the tripwire. As they did, a circle of rope that hey hadn't seen before quickly tightened around Iida's ankles. He was dragged quickly to the ceiling, where he was now hanging upside down.

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Rex : I feel amazing,  like I can take the world, hahaha. this feeling is amazing.

Yun Zin was very afraid of his father so when he saw that his mother was present in the room he no longer hesitated and ran in his direction.

°I haven't fully developed the story line so it may be a bit all over the place.

the story is great I just feel like the MC is an idiot he keeps falling for the same thing like things covering his face but doesn't call the slime or takes a beating when he doesn't have to by withholding his transformation..... But other wise good job Author

1. The name Julien feels a bit strange to me, and it's inconvenient to read (I’m reading through a browser with Google Translate translating the novel into my native language since the app translates incredibly poorly and sometimes deletes paragraphs of text during translation. After translation, the name looks like a hard-to-pronounce French name). I hope the character is called something else later on; it’s not a big problem, just an inconvenience.  2. A damn cliffhanger in chapter 4—moments like these are why I leave novels until at least 100 chapters have accumulated.  3. So far, I like the plot, especially the fact that he didn’t pretend to be that woman’s son from the start. That’s a huge plus.  4. I’m one of those who read "VSOL" up to the ongoing chapters, and I enjoyed it. I’m waiting for the continuation, and I’m really glad the author isn’t abandoning that novel to start this one.