I liked everything about this world . The system there is pretty interesting and fun. It provides a unique blend on things. The characters were pretty good though , there are a few grammatical errors. They aren't that heavy but some common words. Also the use of terms like cut were done in overuse. It is funny but also . I believe you don't have to do it so long. That's just my opinion. Overall I found this world interesting and so should readers. This is full of cool action.
Really enjoying the story so far. I love what the writer played with form. The story reads kind of like a video game and definitely in a good way. It's fun and fast paced. I also love the romantic elements as well. Excited for future chapters and stories from this writer!
It unexpectedly gave a poignant start, which might tell the readers that the narrative seems primed for personal explorations. The author painted the protagonist with a mix of wry humor and resigned loneliness, sarcastic at times, yet for me he has an endearing personality. His interactions sometimes add a touch of lightness. This is a promising story that's as much about internal struggles and relationships as it is about the mysterious circumstances leading to the protagonist's current predicament.
Great premise! with just reading only one chapter, I already can tell that the next will be interesting. The writing style was good and clear. The plot was interesting, and addicting. Hope the author will finish this book!
Just read the first 10 chapters and I must say the novel is very good. The story is similar to ORV yet different at the same time. Can't wait to see how the story will progress.
If you enjoy novel like Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, then you definitely going to like this one, since the author itself is a fan of ORV, and the novel contains references for the novel and other novels too. The only thing I hope the author could improve in the next chapters and even edit the previous one, is the writing quality, since it has some grammar errors.
Absolutely amazing Celestial_Son.
You have a new fan of your series!
I love your perspective, and fine attention to detail.
I must say, i am very intrigued, and even learned a few lessons from your style, all in just one episode.
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With best regards,
vorlefan.
You have a new fan of your series!
I love your perspective, and fine attention to detail.
I must say, i am very intrigued, and even learned a few lessons from your style, all in just one episode.
Keep up the awesome work!