kinda felt bad abt Xu Yang, a nice guy outstanding and good looking and all. But he was beaten by a freaking cheat system user who was originally a loser with good looks.
I dropped this novel.The first dozen of chapters were so amazingly written (and translated) I feel truly devastated how much the introduction of the main heroine (you may as well say she shares the MC status with Gu Yu) ruined the overall atmosphere of the novel.Before the inexplicable complete infatuation he developed for a random girl I liked everything about the plot, the world building is god tier, his craft as an incense maker is very compelling, heck, even the cultivation bits he discovered as he fumbled about cluelessly were very entertaining...But, as soon as the girl-MC comes in fully into the limelight the slow and apacible feeling the MC built on the previous chapters gets totally wrecked for the sake of bringing more "youthfulness" to the story.I get she was jntended to share the spotlight with MC from the beginning. I just can't bring myself to find it compelling.I get they are supossed to complete each another. I just can't bring myself to have her in the same emotional level I have the MC in after so many chapters cheering solely for him.I get she is supposed to be the "brain" of the combo. She frequently strikes me as a snobby, arrogant young girl who doesn't really seem to treat the MC as a friend (let alone romantic partner). I even entertained the idea she is manipulating his pure heart for the sake of completing her mission, I have no real evidence but it's what it feels like to me as she has this inexplicable goodwill towards him right after they meet in person for the first time and she discovers his status as a cultivator.In the end what ruined the novel for me and made me drop it was how late the main heroine was introduced, or maybe how abruptly she suddenly became uber important and the closest confidant of the MC. It sucks i couldn't stop myself from skipping chapters to eventually drop it.
please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel
where is update i am hooked its a great read unfortunately its short on chapters at moment but let it not hinder or stop u from reading it because if you are veteran sci-fi reader you would wanna test this one out because it has lot Science Fiction with magic elements to which make story unique in its own right
The writing quality is smooth and engaging, it's a very good read! The author updates enough to keep things moving, and the story's development is perfectly paced and sensical. Character design...I want to see more and more of Sia, I hope there's a lot a lot of chapters to come. Sia is like an accidental but still somehow kickbutt hero. It's an interesting way to have a character, and the author pulls it off flawlessly. I'd give Character Design 10 stars if I could. World Background is good too, I gave it 4 out of 5 because I know there's still more development to be done. It's a really good read overall, if you're looking for a story like suede, this is the one.
So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter .It's definitely worth reading.
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