you ever wonder if this writer knows the only reason it has so many energy stones is its at top of the list and everyone just pucks it to get free pass?
Hey author i know you treasure this book. But read my review before deleted this comment.First. Everything is rushed. How did 'lucky know thay the mc had a limiter:? It wasn't even mentioned anywhere. And Lucy has killing intent from nowhere. Care to explain not here but in the story.Sceond you are' trying' to get the element of mystery or surprise but you unable to do it.Third the mc has an 'AI' that can look in to the character's weakness. Don't you think that you have added and AI and then the heir of death. A bit to much... The story os great however the turns of events as well the quality is top notch. However, here is an advice. If the first 10 chapters are great then the readers will care to get the money out of their pockets. So please. Make the story much for understand able. What you are doing is writing your thoughts and ideas that you want or thought in your story that you want it to be there immediately. YOU KNOW THEBPLOT AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. BUT WE DON'T. Ask a person to read your story without knowing the plot and you will understand how a reader like me suffers from trying to imagine how mc has AI in his head. Give some details about.
i would say this is a high quality read so far. translation is very nice, terms r understandable.it has comedy in it, which is actually pretty nice.no romance .. yaay.world background looking decent right now as well.MC has big plans and he dosent go about pulling stunts out of his ass.MC is very hard working .. 21 productive hours in a day everyday for 2 years (current info from the story). he is also a genius, might be bcz he transmigrated, but its funny still.i would recommend it. slight horror but basically a reflection of the world.
Your writing is good but i don't really read about cultivation novels, that's why i found the chapters little slow paced. I only read 4 chapters until now, but i think the story is starting to progress a bit. I would love to keep reading further if i have time. keep up the good work.
Good story. I love how you gave the time for the readers to know more about the MC and not jump into the excitement immediately. I absolutely have no problem with that. Writing quality is also good, 5/5. Character design and world background are some that I want to compliment. Keep it up and good job with this superb story, author!
I really like your novel, i am not a native but i think your english is good. Nice story,detailed background, your mc is what it should be,not ***** and always thinking till the detail. A bit of slow but interesting. Overall the story is good. I appreciate your work. Keep it up . Thanks for the chap and nice job
I like the concept I give 5 starsPlz don’t dropI hope u won’t drop I go read this novel nowGood luck in writing! d(￣ ￣)140 characters140 characters 140 charactersThis is to fill 140 characters
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