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The story is interesting in many ways. I for myself haven't read many female lead stories so it sort of a great sight for sore eyes or (whatever its called) The best thing about the story is that it gets better and better. In the beginning the sentences weren't very detailed and felt a bit empty but as I just said it gets better and better and the progress of that is visble. The plot is interesting and I may not have read through all the chapters... yet. But I for sure will.

This novel is a hidden gem. The characters are interesting and complex.  The MC is a total savage and I love it. But i have to say that the story is a little slow and exposition heavy at times. Overall a great read.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

The book was fun to read. I liked the main characters of Sato and Fudo. I don't really like Snow Goddess and her god complex, she calls herself Snow Goddess for heaven sake, it would have been fine if it was people calling her that.

finally a good kingdom building novel hope it goes well at trial reads and gets accepted now i will waste words     dsfsdfsfsdfsfsfsdfsdfsdfsd

This is definitely a good novel and I greatly enjoyed the adventure and evolution through the whole book.The only regret I have is the bad ending, I mean seriously, this is one of the worse ending I have ever read and seen...However, at least it has an ending.. So there is at least that....

I dunno how should I say this...the concept of your story is really something new that I've read.I've read upto chapter 6 so far. The story is great...u've given a decent info about the world background and cultivation too in a sense I guess but it just seems kinda bland  to me I don't know why! The mentality of MC seems kinda weird to me (in my opinion atleast) one moment he is feeling betrayed and tries to deny the whole thing and in the next he is determined to be the best all of a sudden, and it's not bad but it did feel strange.All in all its a good story with potential I think, u have good chapter length and great grammar. So keep up the good work man. Cheers!