Dominatrix System

I was very respectful and careful in my assessment of your story. I had only gotten to either 18 or 20 some chapters in your story before I decided that it was not my cup of tea. the world background was very detailed and contained a lot of explanation which I enjoyed. as for the updating stability I cannot accurately give a rating as I have not personally received an update; for I have only started reading the story recently. your character design is very in-depth, although I did not really get to experience that much of the character I really enjoyed the story. for the story development I gave the highest rating possible for the length of time that I read your story. the writing quality leaves a little bit to be desired as I can easily tell that English is not your first language, or it is your first language and you're just having trouble like me in using grammar. either way it was very entertaining and I looked forward to more stories from you.

Okay so first off this is a combination story, so if you really want to understand everything going on you should also read the Futurani System that they made.
Secondly it has very few mistakes (Like maybe one or two every 10 chapters) and it is really interesting doing a proper balance between **** and storytelling. The only thing I can possibly suggest is having two endings one for each story part (where both win and lose) That way people can still enjoy their choice of favorite.

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this is like the only dom fic thats really gets inro the nitty gritty stuff love it.
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It's a greats story so far, I'm on chapter 6 so I don't really know what up to come on the future chapters when I get there. Gonna be a little surprised :) but I like it so keep up good work!

Started reading this story, and so far its really good. Even for the beginning!

I'm all curious about what's going to happen next.
Thank you for writing this, and also for your hard work!
The main character of this novel/ story is amazing!

Just an awsome book great writing, need more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awsome awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I never write reviews but i just had to