Divine Talent Born Mortal

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While I appreciate the author's efforts, I've come to realise that this story is not for me.  Its not bad, but it does not hold my interest for the most part. The grammar and structure of the story is not so great and I realise if I pursue this novel further, its going to be more expensive, which I'm not willing to pay if a story does not hold my interest.  In addition, I get the impression that in future chapters there is likely to be a harem which I do not like.

The story on a whole is okay, it was interesting for me reading the first 9 chapters and the ML did not once open his mouth.  I also got to admire the 2 masters who decided to give him a new life.  Wish the author good luck in their storytelling endeavors.  But unfortunately this story will not stay in my library.  Take care.

To put it simply, it is a great book, however the translation quality is so bad that I physically cringe through half the chapters.------------------------------------------

Only if the translator have some what knowledge in english he would have not made so many grammatical mistakes and neither English sentence are translated. Please reverse time and change the translator so that not to kill good novel.

I am not a picky reader, I suck at English, so I am not really gonna comment on the grammar mistakes. Overall, this book has great potential the plot is great and it avoids most cliches from what I've read the character development is also good, but there is little to no dialog the you can see the character development but we never really see the developments being put into action. I truly like this book, but it's hard to read when it sounds like a documentary. I am going to drop this for now, but I'll pick this back up and hopefully see some changes in future chapters.

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decent!! this novel need a editor, if you read it as is then its like reading from google translate. Which so annoying and make your eyes suffer...