Divine Talent Born Mortal

my main discomfort in reading this novel was the improper use of the correct pronouns most of the time(you can tell by context who is be talked about, but it's annoying to read). I also found the mixing  up of names annoying.also the  constant blunder of referring to the divine PLANE as the divine plan.

There are so many grammatical mistakes that i could not read this anymore. I'm sure it would be a great story once it has been properly edited

i really liked it and while it could have been better in some ways no novel is perfect and i really enjoyed reading it thank you for your hard work and i hope you make other novels that are as good as this or hopefully even better

the MC has an archer's name but does not use an arch, this can not, he uses spear and sword already a bow does not disturb, it cool to have dragon blood, I want to see him transfer to a dragon in the future.

grammar is worse than mtl its the thing that made me stop reading this.
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decent potential but you need an editor and proof-reader
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Every MC is OP ,but that doesn't mean everyone wants to read an OP MC story. But OP doesn't mean MC should be OP from the start, if you're not writing a parody Fanfiction.

I Know I'm being unreasonable here but I still want the content to improve far more. It has potential don't waste it.