100 chapters in and there is still no major plot. the MC is playing a game but I'm not sure what the story is about. splitting focus between the real world and the game world is unbalanced. the majority of the story happens in the game world and every update in the real world seems trivial. the MC doesn't really have any goals in the real world and the game aspect does not seem like a game, no other players interacting with the MC it seems like he is in a typical wuxia world with no consequences.
It already hook me up! 😤😤😂😂😂😂😂😂The name and the tittle 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻🙌🏻 But remember this is how quidan is trying to make <<crazy detective>> get elected! Hump hump!
Good book with evil and villain main character. no moral restraints and willing to do anything for power and benefits. story is good and world is gradually being fleshed out.
1. Writing is fast paced, the narration is stale and boring as well. the quality of the writing is a bit worse than many trial reads.2. Story development how should I say it? just decent.3. Won't say anything about updating stability. for now I will give five stars.4. World background is decent as well just not good enough for me, it is stale.
It just isn't very good and the character make no sense what so ever, and the very law of time travel is simply "If you travel back in time to do something then that something you traveled back in time to do will never have existed thus you would never have traveled back in time to do it" paradox.
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