please not the dick slapping part......... I was getting all emotional and feeling sorry for April but that part made me crack hard.. how long is he down there, ehh Author?! ...
I'm hooked. so I need more chapters. with more chapters, I'm more inclined to read, then more inclined to spend money, then be more money. until I ran out... then repeat again when I got more money.
Haven't read it yet but aint the dude on the cover the same guy on the cover of Another World's Versatile Crafting Master. The background is different and they are facing different directions but i swear they're the same dude
First, writing quality. Its not good. Its readable, but as everything in this book it degrades as the book goes on. The grammar is all over the place.Cant really say much about updates, since I just binged 260 chaps. But doesnt look too bad.(this part may contain some spoiler, but I dont name anything specific.)Story... horrible. The first part is very nice, a lot of world building and focus on magic, somtimes some romantic scenes with his wife, and at some point he gets a second girl. So yeah, its ******** harem. But later on it just turns into badly written sex every single chapter and at some points the story just straight up repeats itself. Just SAY that his "essence" can heal everything magic related. It starts as a nice magic novel with some sex and romance every now and then and after 250 chaps its a badly written ero novel that sometimes justifies why he gets a new woman. Author if you read this, a harem with more than like 5 people just loses any sort of romance and is a plain ****feast. Which is fine, but then make it sound like its a ero novel and not a fantasy one.Character are the same as story, they are pretty nice in the beginning and get shallow in the end, World background as well, but it got built pretty nicely in the beginning. All in all, badly written, story degrades, has some inconsistencies every now and then, but the story itself had potential. It was nice until the like 3rd wife came.
Love the story but for the love god dear author can you move the fights faster cause I’m reading the chase chapters and it feels like the fights has been going on for a week. Other than that great story.
I have read this novel, and it's very good. The mc has OP army from the start and this book is the first novel written by the author and the other two books which have been released, their protagonists are like janitors of this novel's protagonist. The mc is very laid back and the mystery also builds up in this novel. Clearing many mysteries about the Xiling Empire that was mentioned in the record of unusual creatures and the God Clan in the same book. They'll be introduced in this book too and all the Xiling terms that must have been confusing in the records of unusual creatures novel will be made clear in this novel. And yeah Raven was a prototype made from one of mc's friends lol. And apparently the first raven couldn't do anything better. The novel is very funny, plus the itsy bitsy foreshadowing makes this novel much better. And yeah there are some anime worlds like A Certain Magical Index, Rozen Maidens, High School of the Dead in this novel where the mc travels to with his subordinates. And well , fret not they are o nly minor interlude and serve as comedic relief.Overall I Would say Please Spend coins for just one chap so that you could be counted as someone who has supported the book so that it could be translated. And ask me any questions pertaining to this book as I've completed this book.
Hmmm I have been thinking about the summons. Practically any shinigami girl from bleach would be good. you would just have to make an excuse to seal their soul powers so they arent so strong, like because they didnt have a physical body the system had to make one from scratch and it is incapable of handling the amount of power their soul will unleash. So as they cultivate they unlock and are able to use more of their soul powers. Plus would be huge help for ninger to develop her zanpaktu and even learn kido.Haruhime from danmachi. She grew up as a shrine maiden and has excellent potential and could even be a fox goddess reincarnated.Xia qingyue from ATG when she is at earth realm or even before she leaves to her sect and hasn't developed true feelings for Yun Che Mikasa from Attack on Titan. Cultivation world would be a huge change. Though I dont know how you would make her fall in love with MC since she is so set on her step brother.A girl or girls from naruto world would be fun but tricky. I like Hinata or Mei it could even be younger versions of the older generations like tsunade or mikoto. Tsunade would probably be best bet as she is strength oriented but has the ability to heal others. If these are to powerful a weaker ninja/assassin type of girl would be shigure from Kenichi. Anyways could go on. If these people are no go or considered to powerful for now that's cool. I was more or less just trying to jumpstart the brain storm.
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