Devourer System: The More I Kill, The Stronger I Become

"Just a normal girl. Why do you ask?" I replied in an appealing voice with a concerned yet confused expression.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

"I could find out just by smelling it, by smelling the smells I could see the numbers.

Although the first few chapter are mtl with slighty to no edits, it gets better as the story progresses. By better I mean the author actually starts to edit them. I guess the author wasn’t too familiar with the plot for the first few and wasn’t sure which one to translate, so they left it alone for the readers to help correct. Could just be my take tho 🤷u200d♂️

I've read up to the blessing ceremony, so that's what 220 something, I enjoy the story but it's kinda just been dragging in a boring place for quite a while honestly, I'm bored of age 11, and the constantly running away has gotten old pretty quick. also i dont believe for one second that he would have simple been allowed for one second to skip the grand ball. it's like he runs away from the interesting plot only to grill meat with the Pekkos. can he just stop hiding literally everything and do something pls.

Honestly, there are many stories with the MC as a professor who exudes a powerful aura with a stern, disciplined, and unapproachable demeanor. When I read this novel, I realize the protagonist in this story, almost similar to 'A Villain's Will to Survive,' as both are about a third-rate villain known for his elegance, arrogance, and perfectionism, masking many secrets. The MC in this novel is obsessed with his past missing/dead sister, whom he replaces with his current sister after transmigration. In contrast, the MC in 'A Villain's Will to Survive' is obsessed with his ex-girlfriend, whom he replaces with his fiancée after transmigration. I just hope that the author doesn't end this novel as disappointingly as 'A Villain's Will to Survive.' So here we have a brocon MC. What I want to see from this novel is perhaps for Charlotte, his current sister, to become more siscon and more possessive. This novel has good inc*st material if the author wants to go in that direction lol, though anti-inc*st readers will hate it. The good part of this story is how the author handles and connects each arc. When the author introduced Arwen as a background character, I was surprised at how it brought many red threads in this story. It introduce many new arch that have connection with Arwen. For critics, with MC behavior, I don't consider MC is a suitable romantic lead, especially in harem genre. That's why I'm not particularly fond of how the author introduces numerous heroines to fall in love with the MC. It's better pair Astrid with Ezra, original protagonis, rather than making Astrid develop a crush on the MC. I think, in the original timeline, Astrid had a closer relationship with Ezra as a rival and tsundere heroine. Again, my critics, Ezra's character is too similar with  Sylvia's from 'A Villain's Will to Survive,'. Both are perfectionist and even have similar in their stalking behaviors. More over both have their mothers' deaths attributed to the MC. Oh, dear author, you can't make an outright copy of that one, too.  Additionally, Margaret is similar to Julie from 'A Villain's Will to Survive'—both are knights with a strong sense of justice but are betrayed by their comrades. Many readers of 'A Villain's Will to Survive' were disappointed because, in the end, after much teasing, the MC did not end up with Julie. Will you do the same, author? Just pair MC with his sister😛

Author here !  Give starting 2-3 chapters a chance . You will definitely like it .I am updating chapters 5-6 days a week .

Alpha Shadows: Forbidden is very interesting! You have great quality writing—engaging and well-structured. Keep up the good work!