Devour:Warrior in Despair

"watch where you going dumbass, you don't just bumped into someone and stand there like a fucking mor....."

//Welcome back hunter…//

"Stop it! Already" Olivus

"I know but I wanted to see you again" I said.

And we could all use a little change

Abel then equipped the Sword given to him by Argo.

Very fun to read ,the humors are on point

send the next chapter bro your taking time

I like the first two chapters of the story; they really pique my interest, the MC is quite likable, and his emotions feel real. However, once he traversed into another world, his arrogance skyrocketed. The story is unique but too fast-paced; having a rebellion in just two chapters at most felt somewhat lacking. If I may suggest, try to explore your characters deeper; give them a background and their goals. Consider them your creations and let your readers have a proper understanding of the world. Do not just rely on MC reading thoughts. And I would like to ask the author, will the MC return to his previous world? I'm more interested in that than his current world.