First time posting a review (but this also means it's the first time I found a sorta new book worth giving a review to)Starting with the writing quality, it's got good grammar, decent sentence structures which are not too long or short and no typos.The story pacing is decent, there's no rushing into different plots and there are no unfinished plots or loopholes either. The story continues steadily which fits the character well.The character design itself is amazing. MC isn't dumb, he can think and avoid attracting trouble (like when he gives spirit stones only to extract, doesn't upgrade cultivation level, hides level and conceals power) and can react to difficult situations (as proven in with the 'sword thief'). He doesn't rush blindly into situations, nor is a cowardly rat.He makes amazing use of his system and must I say that this is the best system in existence, to the point that I was insanely jealous of MC at one point. The world setting is a simple cultivation world but it fits the story perfectly as overcomplicating the world would only disrupt the casual vibe the story gives off.All in all, this book is amazing and I keep looking forward to chapters. To the author, pls never stop updating this book until completion and thanks a lot for this top-quality content.
and here is a spoiler.....,..............................,..................................................................................you have been cheated
I really like this new version than the old one for many reasons:1 Less nonsensical dialogue of the MC2 More stable personality of the MC3 Good flowthe rest are just minor issues, anyways, i still love thisKeep up the good work, AuthorLove you from the bottom of my Blood Dimension❤️❤️❤️
I gave up on this by chapter 15 because of the translation quality. The world doesn’t seem well thought out either. Other than that it seems like a basic power up fantasy.
It would be a great story if there are more chapters. Until now it is a goog and unique beginning and setting and has the potential to be interesting for a long time.
Worth Reading! plot development is good and concise, all the character may not have a detailed background but can be considered stable and pivotal. Interesting point is how the world structure takes place specially how the author's use of diverse Historical Places not just the ones in MC home country
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