The story was good from the start, the plot was not bad and the character and power of MC grew pretty nicely but the quality just dropped so hard after chapter 40 that I can't bear to read it anymore.
first the translation is bad but to MTL readers it's good second this novel is unique as it's a combination of off different types of novels 1 sect building novels in cultivation world2 clan/business novels in cultivation world i think this more of a try by the author of trying to combine two different types into one the problem with such 1st of it's kind novels is that the combination is not perfect as in such works a 20-30 chapters would focus on one side then the next on the other hence emulsion is not very great and sometimes breaks too
I read sixty chapter now . Story a little bit different from other xianxia (cultivation system you will see when you read first chaper) and mc not fighting master or something right now i think. Transmigrate , to much girl , slavery , thrash mc they are the same content so i need read more chapter for better understand how its this novel . Ty
Leaving a review because why not? 🤩This is my first book about kingdom building that I have read and I have to be honest—I am amazed as an author as well as to how different and at the same time different it is to write these kinds of stories! It must have been difficult!Anyway...Writing quality: I like how the author wrote the story! You could find less grammar mistakes and I like the creativity put on this when it comes to his writing in his action scenes. It is one thing—to be honest—that I am envious of because action scenes are difficult for me!For the update stability, it is already a given. 😉 I could see how continuous the efforts of the author to be able to update without stopping! 🤩 Great job—despite the busy schedule! Adulting hits hard! 💪For the story development, from the chapters of 90+, I could say that the author has been planning well of the plot. From the number of chapters as of the moment, you could deduce from the pacing that it is just right—not too fast and not too slow, giving the readers ample time to read and at the same time enjoy what the author has to offer. 😉 I could see surprises are going to be in released in the future!Character design—to be honest, I would have to read more to get a better say of this. But as I could see from the comments of the readers, they are torn between cursing the ML or either glorifying him. For me, I have yet to read more chapters to have a say in this so I would have to comment back on my review to have a better say on this aspect. 😁Finally, world background. World background for this kind of story is something difficult in my opinion because you would have to think outside the box. To be honest, I could not pull it off! 🤭 However, for the author to weave this creative world is something unique to his story—which is very amusing on his part! Well done! 🤩Keep up the good work, MoeJam90! 🥳 Wishing to learn more from you when it comes to writing action scenes! 💪
Okay here is my review ...Wrting quality is okay not perfect has not too many flaws and very readable. As for Story Development... Not too many chapters as of now but I'm liking it's development for now for Character Design now is not your best MC and is actually laid back and down to earth Updating is Fast maybe 2 chapters every other day and for the World Background is not your typical Info dump every action the MC takes over all VERY GOOD definitely will continue reading and waiting for new chapters..
As I reader till chapter 81 I can assume some things about this novel and that is: it's dull, the characters have less personality than a door; the plot is very predictable and boring; the lemons are good but the relationship development doesn't exist, yuan call someone his wife as soon as he met them and already "love" them. This novel is good to pass time if you don't have anything else to do.
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