Destiny of Drago and Phoenix

    Author: Ahsan_Yousaf_9740
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. MsSmiling
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    Everyone were in a rush asuasual.Danisha lived alone in her villa which she built by her own earnings.She had her assistants and manager instructing her the schedule for the day.She listened to them carefully while she got into her vehicle and drove to her shooting spot.She shooted for a high expectation film which was a regular commercial one.She greeted everyone over there with respect.She  got her makeup done and was ready for the shot.Director gave her the script and explained her,her portion.She shook her head and got up.As the cameras were rolled and lights were on,Directed gave a scream'action'. The background was a park.She was searching for someone.The director expected her to look for her lover...and as the camera lowered she need to collapse down crying.The director never worked with her...He didnt know the skills of Danisha.He was in a thought of saying cut use glycerin and restart for the crying scene.As Danisha entered the scene,she was tense...it seemed as if her heart was beating 100times a second..Her eyes were red..They were watery but tears didnt flow out...She gasped for air as she was running for long time..She looked everywhere for her lover...Everyone in the set felt there hearts were being pierced...Danisha started to look more tense..She had sweat all through her body...Camera started to lower...The director was all in anxiety of what danisha would do next...As camera lowered...Danisha fell onto her knees...she bent her head down and started to cry...she lifted her head as she cried and looked into the camera..her eyes where intense...her cry was heart breaking...and she left out a scream...the scream depicted her pain and her love.....Director said CUT...He was overwhelmed...happy and he couodnt believe his eyes....He thanked her for the shot...he said it will remain the best scene in the industry...Everyone in the set congratulated her...she completed the remaining part of shoot and left in her car for lunch.
  1. niteshbhasin
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    Shigure really surprised to see Viltus there and immediately walks towards him. Yuudachi also walks towards him and both of them drags him away from the desk. Viltus then asks them,
  1. TheRuler001
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  1. Discarded
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    "What a wonderful morning isn't it?" Suddenly without realizing a third guest had joined their table. In any other situation, both of them would've been startled by it, but this was a day to day sight for them.
  1. LordDragonMonarch
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    Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
  1. CherryMay2682
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    "What? I don't know what are you talking about magician." Doctor Jack staring at me with his creepy face.
  1. Izana07
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    It's a good framework for a story, if not a little goofyPros:- Very descriptive writing, I can picture it like an anime in my head- First chapter has an interesting hook- Character designs (when they are described) are cool, like the boy in chapter 3Cons:- The chapters seem quite disconnected from each other (but maybe you have plans to tie them together in the future?)- The random romance in chapter 2 seems a little unnecessary- Reads like a creepypasta at some points
  1. CubanPete1999
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    More plsWhy are you doing this to me I ha e to wait everyday to read just two chapters of the amazing novel30/10 for me
  1. DaoistwmVHMg
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    Let me say this - no harem. Romance depends, but not any for now (or for a long time) so you can take your time enjoying the story. I hope you stick around and add this to your reading list to show support.
  1. DaoisteqzVGe
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    Hello, loyal readers. I apologize that I cannot continue this novel due to an exclusive contract on another application.Instead, you can read my new novel titled "I'm Not the Weakest Luna" or "Transmigrating to Showbiz System".Thank you for your support and look forward to power stone votes, golden ticket, and other interesting gifts.

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