Destiny Awaken

Bad translation. Low intelligence (mc).Bad translation. Low intelligence (mc).Bad translation. Low intelligence (mc).Bad translation. Low intelligence (mc).Low effort webnovel.

If I had to live my life again, I'd make the same mistakes, only sooner.Tallulah BankheadEverything I like is either illegal, immoral or fattening.Alexander Woollcott

If you were trying to read The Lord’s Empire and felt it lacking, this is the story for you since this is basically what it was inspired by, if I recall properly. The skill development, cultivation, npcs, allies, villains, every aspect of the game system are ALL better. I read this one first, so I couldn’t stomach The Lord’s Empire hand-wavey way of doing things. This is a good MC that works for his advantages and plans ahead. He’s smart, hard-working, and puts in a lot of effort to be a loyal friend. He’s also not fake humble or even pretending to be magnanimous, while actually being black-bellied. He’s a good person who just wants to build the best future possible for his family at all costs. It’s also nice that not every woman is placed in the novel to chase after him and stroke his ego by being face slapped. Everyone is pretty reasonable in comparison to most novels like this. You can understand why people are the way they are. The only person that might be annoying in the whole novel is the sister, and that’s just because she’s a Mary Sue, but she also 8, so whatever, I guess. She’s not in every chapter so it’s tolerable! I only got to around chapter 357 ish? Before I paused. I think I burnt myself out a little bit? The story is more technical than some other stories and is really focused on territory stuff, and sometimes that just isn’t what I’m in the mood for. HOWEVER, that doesn’t make it a not good novel. It is amazing at everything it sets out to do. TLDR: it’s great! And has very few plot holes in the novel minus when it comes to the Mary Sue sister. 10/10 great MC, great cast, great rivals, great system! If you have any questions or need something explained feel free to ask! I really enjoy the story and it being here makes mobile reading much easier than GT because of the ad glitches.

*This is my personal view on the development of the story.*It started out so good! it had me instantly recommending the story to a friend, as I loved the whole short Arc of him being a Trooper, but from there I must say it sped up quite a bit, him turning into a padawan right after the first war/scuffle. which, for me, left much to be desired. As I had hoped for him to take the captain/commander role for a while longer as a Trooper. But again, this is just my personal view, the story is good and well fleshed out, so do check it out as it has plenty unique points.

The story has a lot of potential and generates great momentum and urgency in the early chapters causing you to really get into it.The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him.To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating.The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end...Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things.Thus my recommendation is this: Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all.For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.

Webnovel already posted this novel before. At first i thought it is a similar novel but after reading 16 chapters it is same.This isn't that bad. Previously i dropped this novel around chapter 60 and i dont remember the reason for it

Dude at least write more chapters than these.I love to see it going. Want morr to read but you don't update.💜💜💜Please add more chapters and do a mass release.

Is it shameful to give your own book 5 stars? What a joke! If I can't like my own book, who else will?Besides that... I'm seeing all the "Don't drop the book" comments, can you guys also see the pressure that writing a story like this has? ;3I'd just like to say that I don't plan on doing so at all. I quite like how things are going and I'd like to make this one of the best light novels out there.But thanks for the support guys, I really appreciate it and the fact that I'm getting so much love despite this being my first book is really welcoming. So I thank you.