Der Ewige Oberste

[The the goddess Iris is now real both in the game world and your world, system suggests that host be careful because if Iris finds host then host will probably be chased and followed for the rest of host life until host loves her]

"I can't believe the Kelger Trading Company is not selling anything nor buying anything to merchants like me. I think they went bankrupt," the man said.

And we could all use a little change

The novel is good for what it is. It has great promise and makes you want to read more with the MC. But, you’ll soon find yourself skeptical of how the MC operates, how he knows so much technical-know-how in such diverse fields, and how he navigates the world he’s in to get what he wants. It seems too… easy. Even though you know, there is a practical and more believable alternative to getting what he wants. For example, instead of leveragint someone’s reputation to get a loan with no basis, put the building you own that has roughly similar value as collateral. Also, A lot of the things the MC gets away with or talks himself into getting, would not happen in the real world or be a lot harder.I feel as if the real world basics are not properly covered, such as some laws or policies as well as some world building, and as soon as a love interest is brought into it, the story begins to feel more forced than it felt before.I feel as if the novel just needs a lot more work.It’s ambitious and has a foundation, but it’s lacking.

This review is from the Author Himself..feel free to ask any questions under here.i hope you would like my novel