I'm a sucker for pet novel but I'm losing my braincells reading this. I'm a sucker for pet novel but I'm losing my braincells reading this. I'm a sucker for pet novel but I'm losing my braincells reading this. I'm a sucker for pet novel but I'm losing my braincells reading this.
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This novel is actually cool👍 funny 😊and interesting. Even though I just started. The novel make senseI also like the writing style... and the way you design the mcTry to upload more chapters
This is a bit slow paced, but I still enjoyed the character design as well as the world background. I love this is updated very fast. More power to you author
Okay here comes the great review of self proclaimed Master Blaster Plaster Trasher... Ugh... I guess I got a little self burn... Ahem Anyway here comes review after I read first five chapters.Pros Of Novel:1- The detailing of characters are great. Emma Fisher already became my Waifu and Alex and Ravi are best male characters. Lucy is still vaguely discribe but not every character can be discribed in just 5 chaps.2- The plot is intriguing. All these things like it's futurestic yet there ain't much need to describe atmosphere is what makes reading iy convenient.3- Till now, none of the chapter is anything boring. They piqued interest and were able to maintain that.(No even I can do that... I can't do anything though)Now onto the Cons:Well there ain't much maybe cuz it's beginning or maybe it's just that good but here are some suggestions.... Try to maintain world building. The surrounding the crowd and even tiny things like rooms and halls. Even though it looks like there ain't any need to do that now and story is interesting. If you suddenly started world building all at once, it will become hard as well as boring. So If yoh start doing it now irrespective of whether it's needed or not with interesting stories still there, I think it would help you in long run.So Finally My 5 Start review cuz there ain't any flaws for now at leat.
Just finished reading a few chapters.In terms of writing, I found it very easy to read and the flow was smooth. I didn't come across many grammatical errors which is great for a wider audience. The conversational style of storytelling was engaging and I didn't have to keep going back to understand what was happening.The plot was interesting and cleverly intertwined the protagonist's past and present life to create conflict, which gave the story great potential for development.I felt that the characters were played safe, but overall they were okay. I hope to see growth and development in them as the story progresses.The updating stability was consistent which is great for readers who want to keep up with the story.The world background was well laid out and clear, and I am excited to see how it develops as the story progresses.Overall, I enjoyed reading this and I plan on keeping it in my library.
such a hanging end. a journey from the weak, a story of survival in the deserted planet, unto the general of human race. a story of betrayal, rivalry, and a friendship.
"I guess mom forgot to check him if he's in his room or not. But at least he found me." I said as I carry Mr. Snow back to the living room with Cam behind me.
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