Ok... I read my work after the blackout from the writing and found many shortcoming in the story. So I thought why not review my own work. So far I think the pace of the story is good.. comedy felt good except for some cringy part. Grammar is ****ty with lots of substance missing. Characters are pre established in Canon and no major changes except for ocs. Overall I think it's ok for just casual reading. I think I can except it as passable for my first story.
This novel possesses an interesting world and premise, my problem with it is how dumb the MC is. I can forgive the OP MC overhaul, but what I cannot forgive is how he tries to justify and explain how everything he does is for "justice" and that he is a "kind hearted student"...oh my god, give it a rest already.
Definitely didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did when I first went in! The thing that really draws you in is the fantastic world building, and the kookiness of our MC, Auntie Flow.Other than a few minor spelling mistakes, I don't spot anything wrong. The grammar is consistent and the spelling mistakes don't detract from the reading experience.At chapter 27, still a bit too early to see where else this is going but I am enjoying the character interactions and development a lot!I really like Auntie Flow's character design. She comes across as unique and fresh in the scope of normal MCs, and she goes at her own pace, which is really nice.Looking forward to reading more in the future! Keep up the good work, author! :)
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