Demon Monarch: The Dark Fate Overlord

This is more like a comedy - all issues get easily resolved & MC gains another follower through the same MO each time: strong fighter is unconvinced & unwilling to become a slave. Other slave demonstrates their power (usually by breaking a cup 10 feet away). Strong man gets convinced & signs the contract. Cut & paste multiple times. The events unfold without much buildup or tension, after 60 chapters this is beginning to read like a comedy.

I know that this book is probably not going to be picked but this book is one that I would read all of the way to the ending just because of how the MC acts

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De la grosse merde,je m'attendais a rien et j'ai quand même été déçu.PD

Your oddly specific with height. Trust me the story doesn't need it. Also focus more using words efficiently. I'd try some power verbs to punch up future  chapters all in all its not bad

"Ariel are you" okay I asked worriedly

[Plot Armor?] {?????!}

NFL is Rugby with protection on their body not football.