Deepforge Saga

Thanks for this novel and all your hard work author I absolutely love Daisuke character and how he saved it’s hi and became sworn brothers with him and I love the wolves that you put into this story wolves are my favorite animal in the whole world so I am really happy to see them in this story as summoned beasts also I love how Daisuke saved Hinata and kept it a secret for a while and I love this whole novel thank you so much stay safe and please keep writing more of this novel

An excellent premise marred by a terrible cast. A more generic MC would do this story a world of good. Instead, our MC complains constantly, is his little sister's whipping boy, and even after he outpaces her, is still manipulated by her and mildly poisoned for her amusement over pretty revenge. The author constantly treats this sister as the upcoming female lead. The best character is the sister's rival, who gets next to no time in the story other than to show the sister's tsundere desire for her brother. The sister is abusive, manipulative and petty. Her only redeeming qualities are her physical looks, which are common as sand on a beach in this genre for a female lead. The father and mother are quick only to believe their daughter over their son, who was historically honest with them and gave no reason to believe her over him. The story in the picket dimension is good and a solid 4 star story, but the rest of the cast and time outside the pocket dimension is miserable, or corny at best. The translation quality is acceptable, but for native English readers has some major speed bumps that make it feel like a machine translation. The grammar and word choice can be rough from chapter to chapter. This set of errors is so common that the comments have made it a reader meme. Overall, I do not suggest this story. The free chapters are okay to bad, and the paid ones are more of the same. Spend your passes and coins elsewhere!

20 chapters in and this novel seems to be a promising one. MC is at least a sensible character that I can easily get behind so far. Looking forward for more.

You have a nice book and you are a great writer and a story teller, intriging book, and the fight scenes are the best, would definitely continue with this book 😁😊

"Ahhhh... music to my ears..." Mia was on the verge of crying at such a shameful scene, despair was obviously written on her face. 'Arthur' kept on raising up his hands signifying the audience to get louder.

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Beneficio Em Luta:0

Darth Kaiz looked down at the boy who looked up and smiled, the boy got an evil look in return.  "Is there anything to do in here? It's dark, gloomy, and creepy in this place." the boy said, trying to hide by the sith lord who grabbed his hand and said, "How about I show you around this place?" The boy nodded at the man and walked next to him. Many hours had passed and the two had finally reached an interesting room to the boy.  "What is this place?" The boy asked "This is the Lightsaber Training Area where many Sith over the years have learned to fight with a lightsaber."  The dark lord said as he pushed a button, nearby two young sith apprentices appeared and began to spar. He looked over at the boy who was staring in amazement, he turned to the sith lord and said, "I'm going to be doing that?!" Lord Kaiz pushed another button and two advanced holo-sith appeared and began fighting and using darkside force attacks on each other. The boy walked over by the ancient warriors and sat down in front of them and watched.