I read till ch 59 in this novel, I wanted to drop it way earlier than this but because some reviews said it gets better I kept going for a little while, of course it didn't get any better, aside from the grammatical mistakes, incomplete sentences, use of wrong words, the fight and sound descriptions are as bad as it gets, interactions between characters are very illogical sometimes, even the power system itself is not described in enough details.For what it's worth I think the premise is good but the author really needs to work on expressing himself better.
Got this recommendation from my friends. And I am impressed after reading this. The story narration is very good. No useless dragging the plot and every chapter is intense and really good. Adding it to library. Story got potential.
As a reader, I recommend this story. I think readers will like the story, because it was penned wholeheartedly. That is my honest assessment. Thank you for following this story.
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