Definitely the best story out of this batch. Even IF the story sucks later, the writing quality is very high these 60 chapters. It's the first time I see a fluffy Xianxia with other elements added to the story. All perfectly executed cliches! It's slowly progressing to a serious xianxia. I have a lot of high expectations but also a bit skeptical since I'm not sure where it's going. I can only hope there's no Harem and Master Deer being Main Heroine.
I think this book showcases a scene that particularly intruiges me, especially the experiment (I LOVE EXPERIMENTS as science geek myself). So it already got me in a hook! I would like the fellow readers to take a glance on this book and read the chapters. I highly recommend this. It started good hopefully the consistency continues.There were some inconsistencies with grammar and sentence structure but are just minimal. Keep it up!
This author infodumps for like 60% of the story, and when he’s not he’s wasting chapters on something frivolous. Secondly, the premise was very enjoyable but the execution is way off. There’s zero buildup. Finally, the author had the nerve to refer to black people as literal slaves (that is the exact word the translator used) who fawned over those with yellow skin, and the paleryou were the higher your status. That turned me off completely. I liked it enough to read up to that point despite the many flaws of this author, but the blatant racism is a no go.
He needed to remain focused, after all he had a goal and mission to achieve. However, despite her condition, it appeared she was as bright and brilliant as the rumours said and he felt it would not be easy to broach the topic let alone convince her to agree.
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