Finally a story with substance!!!!. I am definitely paying for extra chapters I just loved it. Definitely the best story I read in this year. There are no arrogant characters(yet). Very detailed storyline(It is as if the author lived in it). I shall pray to god or whatever higher power there is in the universe that this books should get into the top 10 novel rankings and wish the author for success in all his ventures. I also have a few requests:1. Pls don't add any major romance plots in this storylines.2. Try to stay away from revenge plots as far as possible.3. Pls don't add any arrogant rich second generations and the protagonist beating the shit of them later. ( I've become quite sick of reading the same thing again and again in other wuxia novels I'm sure other are sick of it too) 4. Pls take inspiration about the plot from novels like the lord of mysteries and Warlock of the Magus World5. Finally make this novel a special existence when compared to other wuxia and eastern cultivation novels.This is my advice and my request for this novel to become a success. As you can tell any veteran eastern fantasy novel reader are quite sick of the above 4 points so I implore the author to keep the above points in mind while writing a story. Should you wish to become famous as a writer in this genera you should be different.Again I wish the author good luck in making this novel a legend.
The story is interesting fanfics included and also confusing, need a lots of editing( I'm not good in grammar but at least not too bad). Is she a she or he a he? I think the gender swaps from time to time or maybe due to some error in words. Somebody explain it to me.!!!!This story here has a potential in being a good book for reading. Recomends
'Ding!! all numerical stats for your body prowess are now obsolete! the origin system is doing some reconstruction and is still in the middle of it. You can only view abit of your status but not all of it like before. other system function will be unavailable. Only an incomplete status. Even the A.i. Administrator is unavailable(in vacation). note: Will take time. The world merge will be delayed until reconstruction is finished. COURTESY OF ORIGIN SYSTEM teehee!
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