DAYLIGHT; Dean Winchester

So I will be give full stars because I did enjoy the story so far.Main issue that I could tell is complexity and depth of the characters and also their themes but it’s still an enjoyable story, the system and progression. For me personally I like to dive into a characters thought process but that’s just personal preferences.Also congrats on being signed and well done, hope the later chapters have the characters more developed

Will the MC marauds become strong somehow ?

I have to say that this novel is good, the plot, the characters interaction, the flow of story and comedy in it was good. So 5 star from me.

Let’s cut to the main question! Should you take the time to read this novel? If you ask me it’s a resounding Yes!The grammer is solid with a solid flow and the pacing might be a bit to fast, but it still holds in my opinion. The story doesn’t flow far from its original plot line of cultivating in seclusion and gives us a really honest view point on cultivation. Nothing flashy with constant small plot arks and battles. It just shows us a new perspective of those cultivators that just sit in isolation and cultivate. Pretty bland but super interesting to follow along with.Just give it a try.. peace ✌️

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"I don't know how I feel about that, yet. I'll tell you when I come back."

000

'Ryuu no last name excelled at everything, the instincts of a wild animal, has a sharp mind and powerful body a genius like never before. He has a wild attitude but that is exactly what he needs in a battle aside of that he is very responsible and cares for his teammates making everybody trust and rely on him. The best of the best is the only way fitting to describe him' Keith has a very high opinion of Ryuu as he has been with them for the past 2 years and Ryuu is the most amazing talent he has ever seen