God did destroy the world tho (flood remember). So he is even more powerful. you may be able to erase it, but he can create it and destroy it. and that is far more terrifying. Interesting synopsis tho. Let's see if it is good.
This author cant seem to continue his stories. Look on royalroad he drops his stories. This started out great but then the multiple pov got confusing af so I dropped it and also author has discontinued this soo reading this wont be worth ur time.
First and foremost i want to tell you that i binge read this up to 50chapsAnd trust I was frustrated beyond reasoningWhy? *Spoilers*I don't like Mc - He always lead by his nose, Author tried to make him too realistic that he forget when he passed the border of reasoning No romance or so even upto 50Even after interacting with 6 or 7 potential harem girls (or so the author portrayed them) his relationship with them doesn't increase a SINGLE BIT!He cut his ties with his two friends girls who are indicated to be in love with him in early chaps probably after getting frustrated or so the first girl loves him deeply but she cucked him and the second girl probably likes him but she does with his best friend jet and acted like nothing wrong, His fav Ms.teach already has a lover and he starts ignoring her, The strict Student councler is a slut in a real sense so he after an event he starts using her as a stress relief that's it, The girl who helped him from suicide starts showing some signs of "trouble"(that's what most probably author tried to show or I misunderstood which I highly not) before she starts distancing from mc,His step mom which also shows sign of getting 'flustered look' when he comes home early which shows she is also in 'trouble' but she didn't tell,Finally Mara the delinquent who falls for his previous self or something like this but then she starts leads him by nose in every way possible even though she loves him she still shows signs of 'trouble' and I don't know what author trying to do in ch42 that irked me SO MUCH she gets drunk and her two friends girls starts taking advantage of her body and records it before sending the mc (that vibes the disturbing ntr) after that the mc like always gets frustrated and cut ties with her because of that video late at night on phone callOverall this novel overly uses the raope and unwilling se.x trope and most of all it all happens with the every female character that interacts and makes a some bond with the mcAnd also he doesn't do anything to jet who spies on his pc and phone and betrayed him giving those access to the strict councilor who uses those access and erased the evidence that can result him to be expelled from the college which is a great deal to him and he acts like nothing when he meets him like SERIOUSLY Author if you want to make your novel more realistic you have failed really well and even after reading 50chaps the mc doesn't gives a damn to those who related to him and I'm... disappointed in himHe knows everything thing but still.. If author wanted to give an excuse that these all girls are "just potential harem girls" and not official then please let us know why wasted Up to 50chap this doesn't explain anything at all... just a disappointed reader
I'm up to date on the raws. It's not great. MC get's a busted ability early on and author has no idea what to do with it. It theoretically has a drawback, but not really so he just gets OP system+ OP talent and facerolls everyone. The main antagonist is contradictory, because he's disproportionally dumb(Like, if he was as dumb as he's written there would be no way he had his cultivation base). Main heroine is an irrelevant plot device. The biggest atrocity is the cultivation syatem. It heavily references Honghuang/Prehistoric, but doesn't explain, so if you didn't read source material you'll be confused af. Then author decides to give the borrowed concepts his own twist and power levels get absolutely incomprehensible.
I have never seen an author suck his mc so much, each gesture, each movement, each breath,the author adds how majestic are mc, how shocking it is, how extraordinary it is, that everything becomes illegible, with each gesture in a fight, the author adds 2/3 paragraphs of sucking from mc, he launches an attack?boom 3 paragraph of sucking from mc, a dodge? boom 3 mc sucking paragraph.it's just unreadable.
Writing quality 2/5- If I'm guessing, author's first language isn't English. Lots of mistakes everywhere in general.Story development 2/5- Very 'go with the flow' -esque. It's just not interesting. Story is 'told' and not 'shown'. Character design 2/5 - MC makes some smart moves from time to time. Though there's not much substance to him or the side characters. Side characters are dumb, MC is overpowered, and they worship the MC. MC also makes some bad decisions with no good reason.World background 3/5 - Maybe the saving grace of this novel. Personally, I like cultivation backgrounds, so I'm rating this a bit higher. Otherwise, it would be a 2.5/5 for the low level of originality. Author needs to step up his game and learn how to describe landscapes.
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