Dao Online

Don’t get me wrong the novel is good, but there’s a lot of flaws to it especially with the character build up and I’m talking about level wise after 400 chapters, He is still in third order even though many around him is already ranked up. I mean the mere fact that he almost died in the last 50 chapters should, tell you how it is. I mean he has so much experience points saved up that he can jump all the way to the fifth peak order but the author use the excuse of he needs to build his foundation but it’s already been over 100 chapters or even more 300Now let’s talk about the writing quality, to be honest, many of you might not like it in the beginning, but it does get better, but then after 350 chapters in he changes the writing completely. As in if you’re not used to Archaic way of writing, which is pretty much old English Shakespeare, etc then you’re gonna have a pretty much a hard time reading the storyNow let’s go to the kingdom building in my personal opinion I enjoyed it. I mean the mere fact that he was able to build his empire from scratch after many trials, and tribulations is dope. Now, if you were here for the romance that I can say to you that so far, it’s been great in my opinion, at least from my perspective personally, the relationship does not look like it’s forced and it takes over hundreds of chapters for things to develop and etc. Plus it’s a harem, so plus for many of you.Overall I gave the story a 3.6 don’t get me wrong. The story is good in the beginning going up to around 300 but I feel like everything just started going downhill and the story became repetitive. One thing you will tend to notice a lot is every time the author explains a certain character. He will repeat the same thing, 40 to 50 to 60 chapters later and you’ll just sit there and ask yourself why is he writing this because we’ve already covered it. Trust me if you pay attention to details, you will notice it.I do hope you guys read the story and form your own opinion but this is my opinion and I’m gonna drop the story. Of course I will come back to see how it goes but after reading 400+ chapters. I just can’t take it anymore. I feel like it has went downhill instead. To the author, I don’t know if you’re gonna read this or not but I wish you all the best and hope blessings go your way.

The mc is a massive hypocrite who only knows how to think from his balls.That bastard does not want to stand out and let humans find him but he just frees people when they were trying to kill him why because he believes he will be a traitor to humanity. Oh my God! And he yells at the people (beasts) who actually care about him. He also favors humans more than his subordinates. Aand don't even get started in the translations. Reading it I thought my brain explode from all the grammar and Mc's hypocrisy. If you like hypocrite mc then you can read it. But I'm dropping it.

Just another typical VRMMO stories with a badly written plot and cliched events. Shallow male protagonist gets a cheat and turns his life around, wooing girls with his aura alone.When the author uses "coincidentally" after basically telegraphing another cliched faceslapping event one or two chapters before, it tells me he has no original ideas or thoughts.Though I have only read up to chapter 11, I'm sure there will be enough  Deus Ex-Machinas and plot armour to make you sick, and a story so old you'd think disney would have made a  live action remake of it by now.

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Then,I saw it.My hope for another life,the edge of the cliff we were on.As I prayed to the gods,hoping that I do not get reincarnated as a girl,I prepared myself to jump down.

[F*ck!!!!] Howls of pain echoed in tartarus as Mark started beating the shit out of Ares and after a  barrage of beating, Ares was unconscious and Mark started to do what he do best and that is pranking "not even the gods themselves are exempted from the hell Mark spread upon them"