Dao of Trading

the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention.just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content.overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece.just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.

Finally, Eun Young began applying sunblock on her own skin too. She wore a one piece bathing suit that beautifully hugged her gorgeous figure. Her skin was milky white, her hair was naturally long and wavy... almost everyone who glanced at her direction kept mistaking her for a celebrity or a model! She just finished applying the sunblock when all of a sudden, she noticed that the people were gathering at the eastern side of the big pool.

I AM FLOATING!!

"Since when have you gotten there?"

"Aslan, I wonder what you're thinking of when you gaze off into the skies."

Isn't it a matter of preparing a ceremony to give a medal?

"Yeah! Not only did he live he even won his second match."

"Silly. Stop thinking senseless things. On the contrary, you better not flirt with that man or I'll turn him to a eunuch." Zi Jue warned. Yan Qing Shan let out a playful laugh.

Asch calmed himself after thirty minutes because he is really frustrated due to the person who wrote the letter and then he thought to himself, "Well, I'm in the modern era so I shouldn't get angry that much. Polygamy isn't allowed in this era anyways except for some religions. And I don't even have a single girlfriend in my entire 25 years in this world so yeah, need to find myself a lovely lady to accompany for the rest of my life." Asch suddenly thought about his childhood friend "She is the only girl that I really trust and not to mention, her body's proportion is too hot and beautiful with an angelic face... I'll be damned if I didn't choose her. She is also very kind to me even though she always act cold to me. Well, not only to me exactly. Its decided then!" He smiled brightly and turned his head to look at the box, "Now then, I should put the things in the box to my bag and cultivate after I caught some fish.. Oh, there's the fishing rod."

Menatapnya, Gongzi Yu berkata, "Jadi, Kamu sekarang Gongzi Yu."

He fumbled at the embroidered coverlet, trying to take it from the bed, and lay down stiffly--was instantly asleep.

Just Sweet Novel. Two Yandere lovers. If you have read or watched Mobseka (Trapped in a dating Sim) , it's similar in starting but with Better MC. Only problem is Chapters are small and we need more chapters atleast 400 more.