Dance of the Damned

Though i write this novel when there is only three chapter and there is a long way to go. i must says that i found the concept of the story to be interesting and the use of language here is immersive and pretty.

      But i do find some problem in certain scene where there are multiple unnamed Character in the scene and it is hard to keep track of who is doing what. aside from that everything is great.

    I'm going to put this in my library and I'm looking forward to see new chapter as I'm now curious about what's going to happen next.

Great story and nice character build. The background description is also amazing and interesting. This story has great potential. Keep it up, author!

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