To the readers who love lots of action plots, thriller , drama, white haired MC's and gore content with levels of plot twists. This book is absolutely recommended for you.
Coming to review, author did a great job in describing the place where the boy stayed and his nurturing environment. In a small span of time many things happened. From getting heart-broken for our poor and lovely MC's shortcomings to enjoying the thrilling journey with him.
The world background is top tier. You can feel and visualise the world and it's dynamics. The power struggle is real and not an easy match. The unknown path unfolds. I'm not gonna spoil more :)
I loved the plot. The MC's character is well written as well as all the characters in the initial chapters. Can't wait how the story unfolds more.
To the author, I would like to suggest if a new character is introduced and is going to have a role to play in the main trope then some elaboration of features would help the readers retain them in their mind more. It's all about how we feel when we are introduced to him/her for the first time. Other than that the story is
Winter_Iris.
Your writing always captivate me.
Your writing skills and your ability to draw the readers' attention and capture their hearts is incredible.
You are a great writer. You get better each time you write a new novel.
Your stories , whether light or dark fascinate me.
You have a vivid imagination which you pour into your writing.
The words were kind of poetic. Each phrase represented the time and situation the characters were in and the use of the language was kind and mellow to the mind. It was very interesting, I look forward to more chapters in the future.
I really like your writing style. Easy to read and understand without having to read a paragraph twice.
The story is fun...the pace too. Add this to your library if you haven’t yet. Its a good read... waiting for more chapters!
The story is good and so is the concept. The intro is catching, it makes you want to know what will happen to the poor blind Micah. The world background is perfect, it keeps me imagining how it looks like. Good job author
Ah, the title got me! When I saw the genre horror and thriller, I knew I had to read more. Nice work, even from just a few chapters, I can tell it's a great work in progress. I really like it, can't wait to read more!
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Coming to review, author did a great job in describing the place where the boy stayed and his nurturing environment. In a small span of time many things happened. From getting heart-broken for our poor and lovely MC's shortcomings to enjoying the thrilling journey with him.
The world background is top tier. You can feel and visualise the world and it's dynamics. The power struggle is real and not an easy match. The unknown path unfolds. I'm not gonna spoil more :)
I loved the plot. The MC's character is well written as well as all the characters in the initial chapters. Can't wait how the story unfolds more.
To the author, I would like to suggest if a new character is introduced and is going to have a role to play in the main trope then some elaboration of features would help the readers retain them in their mind more. It's all about how we feel when we are introduced to him/her for the first time. Other than that the story is
Your writing always captivate me.
Your writing skills and your ability to draw the readers' attention and capture their hearts is incredible.
You are a great writer. You get better each time you write a new novel.
Your stories , whether light or dark fascinate me.
You have a vivid imagination which you pour into your writing.
Your skills amaze me.
The story is fun...the pace too. Add this to your library if you haven’t yet. Its a good read... waiting for more chapters!
Then synopsis!
And then the story!
Amazing plot!!
nicely written!!!!!!
keeping going author! don't drop it in between!!
i am liking he way story is in process .Just hop in u won't drop the book halfway.
Please give us more chapters