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honestly as for this story it's ridiculously slow paced and Author already trying to make privilege chapters to a story that has gone nowhere yet not to mention author is a big flake wants to charge privilege on other novel at 30 chapters but will write 10 if that and disappear. I do like the Strongest Mage story and characters even overlook the countless errors in every area from characters background changes to simple math. I don't know why web novel doesn't drop down the privilege # when author doesn't produce and I'd suggest not starting a new novel by this author when he is extremely flaky on his main one besides the fact this novel feels like it will take 200 chapters to feel like it's gone anywhere sad but true. Little advice never buy privilege from this author unless you have 30 chapters unread to actually make it worth it don't expect 30 chapters to be written happy reading everyone 😀

Nice one author ... I just added it to my library

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Very cool book. Love the characters and the humor. Needs a dragon. Make it two. This book is for people who like both Harry Potter and James Bond, but think hey, what if...girls. Yeah.

I will start with the good then the bad. ------------Good: A very entertaining read. I enjoyed the story all the way. I would recommend anyone thinking of reading this to give it a try. I won't go too much into why it's good, just read other reviews for that. ---------------Bad: There are mainly 4 problems with this story: 1- Author had no vision for how the story would turn out and the process, only the concept/premise at the start was deliberate. This style of going impromptu and seeing where this goes without setting any short term goals nor long term goals for the story just makes it hollow. Author is following the whims of readers, If readers wanted skill he'll give skill. Problem here is that this causes plot holes and author has to add author notes to explain them and then along the chapters more plot holes appear and author again gives plausible explanations and we fall into a rabbit hole. Events or things that happened in past chapters aren't properly remembered in future chapters by auther. In future chapters when it's mentioned that this event happened, if you go back to that event then you find that it's wrong. Author didn't remember it right, so these future chapters will be built on a false memory.2- Author thoughts and pauses to story throughout chapters. You can tell author is new to writing since author has to explain in brackets why things happen and gives info dumps regularly, author didn't set the rules of the world beforehand, so he comes up with plausible explanations for world rules or events as the story goes. Honestly it just takes me out of the immersion in the story. 3- Characters have bad character design. Only Lia and Riya stayed true to their design, but others not so. How? At the start, every character is shown with his personality clear, an arrogant guy, a narcissist guy, an emotionless guy, a sadistic guy, and so on. The problem comes when we progress in the story, without any gradual changes, they suddenly display weird characteristics and everyone acts as if they were like that from the start. and don't tell me that's love working its magic. Love influences but doesn't change the core personality of someone. especially when that love was there long before the changes, for example, A sadistic guy that's used to being at the top of the world with everyone respecting him like the king that didn't talk much suddenly is a meathead and acts like a puppy and doesn't mind others not respecting him, If it's gradual then I'd understand, but it happened in one chapter. Same goes for Liam, he was the quiet type and smart and calculating, but then suddenly he teases and says stuff only friends of years would say.It just feels author is making them all turn out to be that silly friend group with no prior indication, these changes happen suddenly. No character development. just some lines explain that, like "you've already told me that more than 50 times in our last few hangouts