So far so good, in comparison to the previous story I can see some clear improvement, I also like how the author is always quick to update his stories. The writing quality is great but can be improved. Overall very solid novel so far, I’m really invested. I hope the author keeps up the hard work they are putting in.
Let me start off by saying I really enjoy this novel, but it’s not for me. It’s too slow paced for my liking. My favorite part about the novel is the main character, but he doesn’t get enough attention. 3/4 of this book is about side characters. I just can’t take it anymore.
Early Author review for potential readers. This novel is me just writing whatever I want. In saying that, while intimacy is a core component of the plot of this book, I do not intend for it to be smut or contain any lemons.It is hard to balance, but I will be trying to exercise creativity and euphamisms to describe the plot while avoiding explicit details. If I feel I have gone too far in any scenes, I will most likely revise and change it.In saying this, I hope you enjoy it as it is for sure a new and novel idea that mashes together a wide range of tropes and genres. There will be world hopping to various worlds, and yes this is a harem, although you can expect at least one of the female leads to work at reducing that harem.Engage in descussion, review, and enjoy.Disclaimer, there will be some typos and grammatical errors. I suck at editing.
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