Story is good and all, but I really start to hate the Mc…. Currently chapter 10 or so, but if I were the system I would have already killed the Mc and searched for another host.
It starts a bit slow but once you are inmersed in the plot, the intrigue doesnt let go. I would recommend it to young readers who are looking for adventure and mystery involving a bit of history.
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An explicitly detailed narrative on how schizophrenia works for us to understand deeper people who display signs of mental disorder. A way to convey a message that people with this kind of illness has a struggle beyond what normal people have, and should be understood in a way that must include medical attention, love and prayers rather than contempt, disgust and condemnation.
early review, ch. 47critique first: --infrequently, you may find a typo or slight grammar mistakes. part in parcel with enjoying webnovels--sometimes the mc feels like she speaks more eloquently than the plot should allow, but not a major plot hole why it's good:--mc goes through some very major trauma starting at 10 years of age. none of it is s--ual, yet it's still possibly a trigger warning for parents or folks with rough childhoods. if you can get past some of the rough bits, you start to really get a sense of the psychological depth of the characters early on in the story. their healing and progress makes sense and feels real. overall, I it is a novel that I think shows a lot of potential to help someone who might be struggling. --the main characters struggle is very unique, but is also entirely believable. not corners cut, no dice rolls (probably). everyone is clearly planned and well thought out. --fast paced. there seems to be a system involved, but so far it feels more believable than some far-fetched soul-ai. hope this helps gather some support. :) the world seems a better place for the story so far
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