It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them. There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.
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Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now!
This story is really really bad. The plot cannot be maintained, not just between chapters but even between sentences. The characters are all one one dimensional but the protagonist is in a league of their own, a rare caricature of everything wrong with some Chinese protagonists.Also it should have ‘magical apocalypse’, ‘cultivation’ and ‘system cheat’ tags.
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