Cynic's Odyssey

Cannot give 5 star.Because i know author have a bad habit in delaying the chapter release.Not just this one but many author.Just keep it up an do your best.Dont drop it like the top star.My mood for reading a novel dropped so much.Because some of novel really2 bad to read. And some good novel dropped. Some of it become bad.Author just do your best

heyo crazy cronie here,review on 02/04/2021 @chap28 (released chap till date: 39)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: A good SOL novel. Maybe Dark SOL? Mc ain't dense and pussy unlike most SOL novels. Badass mc with likeable daughter.long review: pros: 1) A good SOL novel. Basic concept similar to most novels though the execution of the plot is entertaining2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) A badass, savvy & OP mc. 4) The writing is simple and easy to understand. TL is doing a good job for now with the translation.5) Characters even though not properly fleshed out, it isn't bad to the point it's unreadable.6) the interactions between the characters are better than most novels out there. Though it exactly doesn't feel real, the interactions between the mc and his daughter never fails to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter7) No probs with pacing. Nothing seems out of place.cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments.  (This depends person to person, for me a pro.)2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Inconsistent update! Really hate it!!! (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it.3) There are few typo errors, though it's not to the point that it's unreadable. No prob with grammar.. 4) Greedy WN & TLs locked this novel only after 4 chaps!! This sucks. That's why deducted points from updates.5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) No world build up and no plotline as of now. One can guess some plotlines tho but we know nothing of this world!IMO:- We need consistent updates!!!!RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4 & con-3)update: 4/10 (con-2)plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&6)   characters: 9/10 (pro-3&5)pacing: 8/10 (pro-7)dialogues: 8.5/10 (pro-6 con-5)entertainment: 9.5/10OVERALL: 4/5  Conclusion:An amazing SOL novel with excellent potential; the only prob being updates! Hope to see regular updates in this one... Chapter 1 will be enough to hook most of you to this novel.WARNING:  *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC is SUPER OP! But also kinda submissive to his daughter... Can be seen as his love for his daughter (fatherly love no Incest!!!)

As the author of the novel, I will give my story the highest score shamelessly.  This story is about the master who is calm, handsome, (innocent), benevolent yet cold, and revengeful at the same time. His disciples are also one of a kind.  Spoiler: The story will be slow-paced in the beginning with multiple POVs from the chapter Huan to the end of "Fighting League". And from that point, it will be a little faster. Read the story while you become a disciple of Rong Yuan along the way...                                                                       

first of all,  i will always make it free and upload like once a day right now i will do it like until 30 ish chapter ......................

First of all CONGRATULATIONS for coming on the second spot in the Contest.You diverted from your romance style and tried something different and I liked it.It wasn't up to the mark but for the first try it was good. I hope you'll try out other genres too. You can do good in that as well I think. About the book I would say that there could have. been more story. However I know it was for a contest so.....The last chapter was unexpected.... directly five years later. And I felt that there are loose ends in the story. I don't know whether you have left it for purpose or it was because you wanted to complete the story but there are.It was a good try and it is a good story.Also update regularly.

This novel is brain rot, so if you like that go for it. At first I thought the author was trying to be clever by writing a dumb protagonist through his own point of view but as he ‘upgrades’ his intelligence stat, he continues to make extremely poor choices. This is just a Chinese urban novel set in America. Decide for yourself if you want to read.

"These qi refinement pills can help you increase the quality of your qi, but if you consumed too much, it might end up breaking your sea of qi apart. So, be careful."

This was probably matter-of-course. Then how could his headache also vanish after his body was gone?