Interesting novel. Intriguing. Keeps one glued to reading & curious to sequence of events. The culture is quite intricately described. It gives exposure to another culture, folktale inserts. Thanks.
The story is inconsistent. At the age of 25 he suddenly ends up in high school then starts a company and makes millions.If you really like the Marvel world, this story may be for you. If you are looking for something that makes sense, skip!
One of the best books on this app. MC isn't an overpowered monster. Great character development. It really reminds me of when I first started playing MMORPGS .
nothing is bad in this book. Sure, the VRMMORPG trend is becoming annoying, but this one takes a different perspective. The world background seems great. The character development is quite realistic so far.
Story is greatly comprehensive and reasonable.it can be improve with time.(with proper editing and solving after grammar mistakes.)I hope I can further improve my writing capabilities.Thankyou
Writing Quality (1)Why? It wasn't even translated, you claim that "you" translate it but you've just copied and cut it on MTL.. at least try to "change" some "unique" chinese slang on the novel.. You're just blatantly claiming you translate it... Have some shame will ya'?Story development (2) Can be change if the "translator" is good..Didn't manage to pass chapter 4, I would rather read some comments than read this badly "translated" novel..
The concept is novel with the MC being a monk for a game character. Fast paced, but the writing style is weird. The first chapter was basically information dump with no transition. However, the world building and stats show the effort of the Author. But give it a try, and see if it is right for you.
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