this novel is really mind blowing. I hope the update would be up the pace .very exciting, educative and inspiring.i would like to read more books from this Arthur
Honest ReviewFound this one has potential, feels a lot like Sword Art Online. (A very hard to read version of it.)The Good: Character classes are unique and it is nice to see an MC that isn't 100% righteous for once.The Bad: Hard to follow... it jumps around a lot with little to no indication. I found the world setting kind of convoluted and some of the situations to be pointless. It feels like a lot of this is filler content so far because I really only care about Shiro and people he interacts with.The Neutral: Objectively describing someone as "sexy" leaves it open to interpretation, that's not a bad thing by itself, but who thinks it is sexy? (i.e. the observers, the characters, the readers, NPCs?) Maybe I missed it, but why are they stuck in the world?Maybe add a note that senshi = warrior and the significance of it so people don't think "WTF are senshis? Sounds like sushi!" or something like that. (Assuming that is what you meant it to be)Feel free to review back and I'll add you on Line if you would like editing help.
Good stuff right here.We got a good concept with a nice plot and good characters that get equally good development!All in all it's really good, if any of you is reading this review just go ahead and read it your not going to be disappointed I swear!
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Its a "righteous" mc again. (Passive lil bish) Gods, we know you were an ***** and an orphan before you were reincarnated. Yeah, yeah, if I transmigrated to another world and little kids verbally abused me, I wouldn't really care. But the point is, they are physically beating you up. Reck those monkey's balls once, and they won't bother anymore. What I'd the actual point of tolerating little kids? F***, how did you even survive as an orphan, mc?
Racist (most probably) European or American novel where they make Russia traitor and Africa borderline Alien 👽 and Mc has attitude similar to typical US army's General who will save world from Alien invasion and Massacre Russian traitors and African (Black people you get it right) Alien... I hope everyone with there just heart can band together BAN this... Its DEGRADING... (FOR YOUR INFORMATION I WOULD LIKE TO INFORM YOU THAT I BELONG TO COUNTRY OF SOUTH EAST ASIA)
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