Cursed Fangs: The Demon Within

The young man turns away from the morning sky.

Looking at the girl who folded her arms with her chin tilted up proudly Zuko almost bursted out laughing. He heard about this princess while walking about the city yesterday. Born silent and sickly she was blessed by the very same water spirits that hate him so much. The princess especially after the death of her mother lacked freedom. Originally he intended to stay in the north for at least a week giving him more than enough time to leave a profound impression on the girl but because of the little healer girl he met last night not to mention the gaurd he killed the past night his time in the Northern Water tribe was coming to an end fast so he had to improvise. He figured with her sheltered and controlled lifestyle she would not have had any chances to act out so something as simple as a drink will be extra appealing to the girl (and it seems I made the right call heh) besides when people are drunk and alone things tend to happen especially if you make them.

Her sword blurred past, missing me by a mile.

"This is ridiculous" Shinjiro muttered

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

Before we go on. There are several levels of humans.

absolutely fantastic i loved it....will read the rest when its out!

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