Great start! The deal has been sealed at the very start... I am looking forward to how will their love story progress......... The title is kinda intriguing. Highly recommended book.........
This book is great .I have reached chapter 300 but I just wanted to be sure before I continue reading, is this novel going to be a harem i just want to know
1. Writing quality is bearable.2. Story development is very forced. Every passive skills become useful with no setup in the next sentence. He would be peaceful for 3 months, gain a battle skill, and a conflict will arrise out of nowhere in the next sentence.3. The MC is dumb. Sometimes having a dumb MC can be fun in a comedy. The problem is that this story tries to be dark. This makes the MC just frustrating. The only reason he can survive even a single day is that he got lucky and has a system. Worst of all, the MC is arrogant and thinks that he is smart while making the dumbest actions and statements.4. Not sure about stability so I gave it a 3 as a middle value.5. The background is terrible. The sect makes no sense and the rules the author introduces gets broken in the next. He does try to think of a "fresh" twist to a sect so I give 2 stars for effort. The problem is that some archetypes are there for a reason. Sometimes that is just an inevitable outcome of logical progression. An example of this would be greedy and selfish people always being in power as the antagonist. This is inevitable when only those that are greefy and selfish can climb over others to gain the wealth and power they have. Once you try to subvert expectations and break archetypes, it instead just breaks logic. So good attempt but poor execution.Overall it was a poorly executed story with an interesting premise. I would not recommend.
This novel is an hidden gem. I search far and wide for this type of settings but couldnt find any op mc since the start novel that can come close to this one. Honestly my new top 2, and prob top 1 in the future if its not going into hiatus etc.keep up the good work !
King threw him out for being uselsss and he suddenly want to him back and apologize when he knew he had gotten power and he doesn't feel guilty and he wants NAOKA to fight for his continent i mean where is common sense well MC is useless without system so if he didn't have system so far it's good mc doesn't spare anyone he just kill them cant wait whare mc kills his way continent and destroy the continent and kill his mom dad and his freinds
Silk turned to see Phoenix was drifting in and out of consciousness. "Just a little longer," Silk whispered taking out his key with the embroidered spider.
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