Cultivation Pet Shop

Well I'm the author, so I have to give it 5 stars, but here are some reasons why you should as well.

1. You like face slapping? There will be plenty of that!

2. You like dark comedy? This novel's dark enough that I can't even see the light switch in front of me.

3. You like cultivation? Well join an adventure where each step will be a slow climb.

4. You like systems? I got all the system you can want, you'll seriously get sick of it.

If that didn't convince you, then maybe this will, cute girls...

This novel is one of those where the MC gets a system not to power-up themselves but to run a business. I personally really like this kind of novels, so it's interesting to read.
So far there are only 4 chapters so I guess the shop would become more and more popular overtime.

A few suggestions I wanted to give based on my personal opinion (author you can ignore these if you want since they are just my opinions)
Do a bit more world building, there are certain things I was able to imagine on my own but also things that I couldn't create a mental image of. One such thing is the shop: there is a transformation but the reader doesn't get to know much about how it looks now compared to before. I'd recommend checking out Black Tech Internet Cafe or some other similar novels to get inspiration on how to describe the changes.

From the general writing perspective I'd suggest avoiding repetitive use of words such as realized and shabby, and look for some synonyms.

The plot is a bit fast but I don't mind that too much.

Overall it's a very nice novel. I hope Lin Fan's sister isn't crazy and the shop grows well. Keep working hard!

Writing is rushed and seems to be an imitation of Astral Pet Store, so originality wise it's just a copy even the most of the plots I.e Old man with pet food and the first few customers. I could stand that, but the plot lines are quite squished together with not much story, not much monologue either and just tries with cheap tricks that makes no sense.

Same template as Astral Pet Store,  but i feel its a hurried version. The pets are not the main focus since theres so little part they played for the MC.The world power level is not empathize since the MC just brushed past the ranks. And theres so little restriction placed on the OP side characters that the MC were never put in real danger since he has OP bodyguards accompanying his every adventure.

exact similar with astral pet store only different names and different chapter order you need some diferrences man not just names an arc that astral pet store haven't done or something

astral pet store copycat? meh...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

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This novel is amazing! - Sarcasm-. This novel seems similar to a certain Qidian Novel ahem Astral Pet Store. Okayz enough if the jokes. This novel is exactly like Astral Pet Store. The only thing that is different is how fast the plot moves and how they meet the Angel in early chapters. Where as we have just met Joanna in Astral Pet Store. Not only that, but the concept of infinite revives, electrocution when MC swears. The only thing really different that is noticable is the weird ass. sister. Which in itself is gross and a main reason why I dropped after literally less than 30 minutes of reading