Cruel King of Ashudhar

Hung on right from the start

I am not just giving 5 stars for the sake of it....This book has good grammar and we get 2 chapters daily, story is awesome and doesn’t have obvious plot holes.....author is doing a great job in character building and the MC’s character looks real......Now, this novel is not the same as other cliche cultivation or game novels....Many game novels are like-1) I have to be the number one in the game and destroy the guild that destroyed me            before...2) WHAT I GOT A SUPER-HIDDEN,SUPER-POWERFUL,SUPER-adjective CLASS IN THE NEWBIE VILLAGE!!!!3)Oh I got the all powerful,omega leveled, invincible tier item by killing slightly powerful monster4)Now lets build a guild, let’s get a shop before anyone else, lets upgrade the guild before anyone else etc5)Now lets annoy some other guild and make a enemy...However this one is very different then others as MC interacts more with NPC’s than players. He gets a powerful item’jade’ but it can’t be used at all until higher stages...He has powerful weapons but cannot use weapons higher grade than his cultivation and gets a weapon that grows with him....he doesn’t have the intention of becoming number one, build a guild to make money or other reasons....he doesn’t try to escalate small matters and is respectful to other people while standing his ground....this feels like he is transported to another world rather than playing a game.....Many cultivation novels are like-1)I need to destroy this clan in the town because they will surely try to destroy my clan....WHAT my clan is the attacker? no way, I always have higher moral ground....2)Why is this little girl in front of the carriage? Let’s cripple the one inside the carriage instead of the horseman and do not scold the mother who somehow teleports after I crippled the young master for not looking after the kid.....3)WHAT The young master’s father is clan leader and this clan has the backing of all powerful sect so I have to kill everyone....does anyone in the clan or sect have the intelligence to deal with this mess without making a bloodbath...4)WHAT my lover has a fiance and is taken away by her clan..now I have to grow stronger to destroy the fiance’s clan but forgive the lover’s clan but I will not get the idea of peacefully breaking engagement .....Here in this novel the guards of the young masters know who to offend and not ot offend...things don’t escalate to the point of clan annihilation .....MC doesn’t have very powerful enemies who force him to become the strongest....MC does other things than just fighting or cultivating which lets the author build a more realistic world wher ethere are not only muscle head but also intelligent people with common sense

This is my first comment. I dont read anytime like this piss of sh*t. This book have a lot of mistake. Like mc is not 10000 years old, mc just a kid, all carecters know just bullsh*t, f*ck the who gives this book five star. Have a nice day

Well i don't really understand why you made your premium chapters with no grammar issue but kept your free chapters full of errors..... (they are the most important because it's them that make the readers stay or leave)Other than this your novel is pretty good.

I truly did not like this and simply couldn't read past chapter 14.I felt as if i would simply die of frustration because of everything that was happening in the novel and the reasons behind it. The author aswell as other 'reviewers' have tried to make excusesfortheplain lack of logic and common sense, but with an mc who changes personality, has a naive trust for strangers from an entirely different planet that happen to remind him of those cultivation novel he read, previously confirmed by his 'system' (master)and makes unique life decisions considering he has 'read novels like this before', marries a girl because he feels sorry that he has no choice but to take her virginity, forced into situations by his useless system that incurs the death penalty for evry failure. The fact that a 60 year old former mma champion, a man who occasionally reads webnovels, predictably gets pushed around by trouble he has invited into his radar, being called a slave because of his haircut and not doing anything about it not five chapters later and not even having a stray thought about freeing himself.

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I personally like the story. Who doesn’t love gender-bender with male becoming female and getting love interest from male counterpart.No OP-much MC, just a steady progressive strengthening for beloved MC which author can definitely lengthen the story while not making it too shabby or boringly.

Doarinha. Tem palavras que poderiam ser trocadas pra soar como algo mais natural e um pouco mais de descrição da aparência dos personagens seria legal. De qualquer forma, ganbatte!