Crowned Betrayals

The story is all right, and has some potential.Since it’s an intergalactic story, the world has a lot of room for development, and the “space cultivation” genre is always kind of interesting. That said, I don’t think the story is that well written, the characters have a bit of humor but that’s it. The conversations feel slightly awkward to read, and the plot is generally kinda mediocre. Since there are other better novels out there, I’ll put of reading the rest of the story for now and try to come back to it later on if it gets chosen and accumulates more chapters.

translation quality pluments after 40 chapters. what waste of possibly good story

Yo this is some gourmett level novel right here the only thing is i hope you make this super long take your time with the world building dont rush things and the harem should be slowly introduced and organically meshed well all the best

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I have a Quick Question I read Chapter 28 I believe it was it said he saw her running towards him And she Smirked and he didn't have enough time to dodge but I don't understand how he didn't I didn't read past that because I was just thinking on it that makes the Mc look a little weird for the fact that he let someone else get him into a fight and he only know them for less than a week

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The storyline captivated me to read further. I love the flow of the story. The writing style is well written. The author has done an amazing job showcasing a unique and creative story. Highly recommended it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!