I cant say alot about this story because I didnt get further than the first chapter... the grammar just kulled my reading spirit and i couldnt go onFrom other reviews it seems like the story itself is praiseworthy, but I will have to wait until the author finds an editor. Please fix your grammar!!!
still don't see the point of rating updates stability for trial reads. world building in the story makes no sense some Rouge organization has access to high tech weapons and enough disposable manpower to send on suicide missions a month after the apocalypse. the MC is a survivalist that did not have enough food to last for at least a few weeks, no prepared weapons, for some reason prepares a fridge but insufficient canned goods and only wheat seeds. has a 3d printer for some reason and a manual generator. all in all there are more things in the story that don't make sense that that do.
"What are you planning Maria?" Master Egor thought very hard, but then a smirk appeared on his face "No matter what you plan Maria, this is the time that you go down!"
I really loved this story and got a little upset when I caught up with it, this novel has everything I love and I need more of it. Please author don't ever think of dropping this and I am egarly waiting for the new chapters.
It's a good novel.P.S. - I've started to write wiki for the novel. I hope you guys check it out.https://assassins-chronicle.fandom.com/wiki/AnfeyPros:1) The story does not try to make the MC best in the universe unlike other cultivation novels.2) The romance is sweet which is described in every few chapters.3) The heroine is not useless whose only role is to motivate the MC but is actually powerful enough to help the MC in various situations. She is actually much powerful than MC till now and is considered top genius.4) There are no stupid 'young lords' who try to kill MC and in turn gets themselves killed.5) The MC is not 'charming' that every girl he meets will fall in love with him at first glance.Cons1) The translation quality is not good.2) Many things are messed up like nobility titles (sometimes the MC is Duke, sometimes earl and sometimes even baron), power levels etc.
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